still processing. im in a haunted lesbian zombi demon ghost train time warp vampire restAurant movie. on fire, but I didn't get my dessert yet so I'm not leaving.
Thinking of doing a pov from ashes pov. And putting it out later after the prompt series because I loved the characters. This is a pretty accurate feeling. Lots of wordplay in here.
You use words like paint. Individual sentences don't mean anything on their own. Each one is a daub of visual effect in the cerebrum that swirls to vivid imagery and feelings with all of those before and after it.
I wanted to give some backstory to June. How she ever ended up there, why she killed women for their faces. I felt it in there too. Visually while writing it was a mindfuck. The ending was so good. A little bit of a twist. Loved the world. Might come back to it later for a treat.
This is what I want, to be experimental with writing from time to time. I will work on narration later. I am most interested in wordplay right now and making lines.
Interesting stuff. The way you write reminds me of the way I draw. Something seems to "ferment" inside our minds, as you put it in your reply to my "Endless" comment. I'd be curious to hear your thoughts on my drawings sometime too.
I have not read much of Bataille's work unfortunately, which apparently is right up my alley. I read a lot of Nietzsche, but I see here this would be interesting to inquire into for expansion.
Concepts in horror, identity, eroticism, the self. A philosophy/psychology combination mixed with a little surrealism.
That line is the closest thing to the concept of the story. I must now obtain some of his books. I have heard of him, but it slipped my mind for the better part of a decade. A lot of my work is between life and death or the middle between the two, as the character descents into their own madness, demons, inner dwellings.
Eloquence not needed I curse like a sailor drinking a bottle of whiskey. Moving will be smooth sailing this time. It's a happy move. We're going to freedom. 💜
still processing. im in a haunted lesbian zombi demon ghost train time warp vampire restAurant movie. on fire, but I didn't get my dessert yet so I'm not leaving.
Thinking of doing a pov from ashes pov. And putting it out later after the prompt series because I loved the characters. This is a pretty accurate feeling. Lots of wordplay in here.
candlelit tangerines are glowing in my mind. have those two words ever been put together before to such effect. I THINK NOT
Everyone should be more experimental. But who am I to say? It's all about the effect. I was playing a lot with words.
You use words like paint. Individual sentences don't mean anything on their own. Each one is a daub of visual effect in the cerebrum that swirls to vivid imagery and feelings with all of those before and after it.
I am bewitched
💜💜
Damnnnnnn
That's a fair reaction. It's a wild ride.
Loved the ending. Tension was HIGH in that abandoned building
I wanted to give some backstory to June. How she ever ended up there, why she killed women for their faces. I felt it in there too. Visually while writing it was a mindfuck. The ending was so good. A little bit of a twist. Loved the world. Might come back to it later for a treat.
🖤That would be wonderful
One: I am happy ya'll are homed!
Two: Fuck, this one is killer!
It doesn't feel real until we're inside the new spot! This one the lines were exploding out of me. So many are favorites.
I honestly could spend an hour picking out good lines from this.
This is what I want, to be experimental with writing from time to time. I will work on narration later. I am most interested in wordplay right now and making lines.
Interesting stuff. The way you write reminds me of the way I draw. Something seems to "ferment" inside our minds, as you put it in your reply to my "Endless" comment. I'd be curious to hear your thoughts on my drawings sometime too.
I would love to see them. Are they on your page? I do love art.
Thanks! I post them on my substack notes.
Sweet, I will check them out!
automatic writing pushed into flesh via stream of consciousness, where desire is less a romance and more a possession.
identity dissolves through the body, interestingly, like in Bataille’s idea that intimacy only appears at the edge of violation and loss of self.
I have not read much of Bataille's work unfortunately, which apparently is right up my alley. I read a lot of Nietzsche, but I see here this would be interesting to inquire into for expansion.
Concepts in horror, identity, eroticism, the self. A philosophy/psychology combination mixed with a little surrealism.
That line is the closest thing to the concept of the story. I must now obtain some of his books. I have heard of him, but it slipped my mind for the better part of a decade. A lot of my work is between life and death or the middle between the two, as the character descents into their own madness, demons, inner dwellings.
Fuckin incredible 😱😱 I am always speechless when I finish one of your stories I swear usually I’m kinda eloquent 🤣
Eloquence not needed I curse like a sailor drinking a bottle of whiskey. Moving will be smooth sailing this time. It's a happy move. We're going to freedom. 💜
(Also congrats on finding a place I hope the move goes smooth!!)
Ah glad you guys found a place
Yeah we move there in March. Itll be good.