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Nick Winney's avatar

still processing. im in a haunted lesbian zombi demon ghost train time warp vampire restAurant movie. on fire, but I didn't get my dessert yet so I'm not leaving.

Edith Bow's avatar

Thinking of doing a pov from ashes pov. And putting it out later after the prompt series because I loved the characters. This is a pretty accurate feeling. Lots of wordplay in here.

Nick Winney's avatar

candlelit tangerines are glowing in my mind. have those two words ever been put together before to such effect. I THINK NOT

Edith Bow's avatar

Everyone should be more experimental. But who am I to say? It's all about the effect. I was playing a lot with words.

Nick Winney's avatar

You use words like paint. Individual sentences don't mean anything on their own. Each one is a daub of visual effect in the cerebrum that swirls to vivid imagery and feelings with all of those before and after it.

Saint-Lazare's avatar

I am bewitched

Edith Bow's avatar

💜💜

MA Knight's avatar

Damnnnnnn

Edith Bow's avatar

That's a fair reaction. It's a wild ride.

MA Knight's avatar

Loved the ending. Tension was HIGH in that abandoned building

Edith Bow's avatar

I wanted to give some backstory to June. How she ever ended up there, why she killed women for their faces. I felt it in there too. Visually while writing it was a mindfuck. The ending was so good. A little bit of a twist. Loved the world. Might come back to it later for a treat.

MA Knight's avatar

🖤That would be wonderful

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

One: I am happy ya'll are homed!

Two: Fuck, this one is killer!

Edith Bow's avatar

It doesn't feel real until we're inside the new spot! This one the lines were exploding out of me. So many are favorites.

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

I honestly could spend an hour picking out good lines from this.

Edith Bow's avatar

This is what I want, to be experimental with writing from time to time. I will work on narration later. I am most interested in wordplay right now and making lines.

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

Fuckin incredible 😱😱 I am always speechless when I finish one of your stories I swear usually I’m kinda eloquent 🤣

Edith Bow's avatar

Eloquence not needed I curse like a sailor drinking a bottle of whiskey. Moving will be smooth sailing this time. It's a happy move. We're going to freedom. 💜

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

(Also congrats on finding a place I hope the move goes smooth!!)

wrongdimension's avatar

Ah glad you guys found a place

Edith Bow's avatar

Yeah we move there in March. Itll be good.