Perfect.... so many great lines i dont know where to start.
You know how i love how your structures explode pictures and film clips. its totally alive in my head. the clone concept, the empty plastic half bodies, the fantastic alloofness and voice of Alucard.
throwaway violence and destruction. a fantastic dark buddy movie. its a world you can go back and forward into forevwr i hope.
I think I want to come back to it after the prompt experiment. I really like this world. I want to see where it goes. I also have to finish diary entries too, but I can do both.
This would be amazing animated, I don't know if I could get behind a cgi Alucard. But there are weirder things out there. Definitely challenged me with writing action.
I don't usually enjoy science fiction as much as other genres, but I obsessed with your text... The human skin lined coats, the whole sex clones scene... Fascinating.
I am very picky on my scifi as well, needs weird/horror/strange overlap. I got initially back into Scifi with Jeff Vandermeers "Borne" because it was weird and let me know it was possible for strangeness. (I was not thinking about Borne when I wrote this) Working on containing my poetic prose into narration. I was thinking of class warfare when I wrote this, like how unhinged America could get if they are allowed to free roam in their cruelty. Too bad I can't get a large mystical creature to do my bidding.
That makes perfect sense, this was more of the the horror chapter because she was dealing with big bad. I felt free when she finally got out of there tbh. I couldn't write it fast enough.
This piece brilliantly captures the visceral horror of dystopian control - the way you portray the body as a site of power struggle is chilling. The imagery of humanity being hunted and manipulated really drives home how dystopian systems strip away agency at the most fundamental level.
A lot of it is reflective with current systems of the world, some things have not been made. I'm glad you caught onto the metaphors. Thank you that's what I was hoping to go for, something a little unsettling to remind others why agency is indeed important.
I was eating also string cheese as I wrote it. ~ clones were weird rubber creatures in my head but like a step above silicone like if silicone was slippery skin. I didn't want to spend a chapter on skin, but almost did. Thank you! I have been working on action. I want it to be poetic even if it's grotesque. Now this is over time for some lesbian werewolves 💓
Perfect.... so many great lines i dont know where to start.
You know how i love how your structures explode pictures and film clips. its totally alive in my head. the clone concept, the empty plastic half bodies, the fantastic alloofness and voice of Alucard.
throwaway violence and destruction. a fantastic dark buddy movie. its a world you can go back and forward into forevwr i hope.
I think I want to come back to it after the prompt experiment. I really like this world. I want to see where it goes. I also have to finish diary entries too, but I can do both.
This would be amazing animated, I don't know if I could get behind a cgi Alucard. But there are weirder things out there. Definitely challenged me with writing action.
this would indeed be a great animation...graphic novel or actual cinema. its like you have dystopianaemia...its flowing through your veins!
I don't usually enjoy science fiction as much as other genres, but I obsessed with your text... The human skin lined coats, the whole sex clones scene... Fascinating.
I am very picky on my scifi as well, needs weird/horror/strange overlap. I got initially back into Scifi with Jeff Vandermeers "Borne" because it was weird and let me know it was possible for strangeness. (I was not thinking about Borne when I wrote this) Working on containing my poetic prose into narration. I was thinking of class warfare when I wrote this, like how unhinged America could get if they are allowed to free roam in their cruelty. Too bad I can't get a large mystical creature to do my bidding.
she's got a mind like i don't know what, doesn’t she!
Incredible imagery, as always. I'm repeatedly struck by your descriptions. You have a great talent for flowing, poetic prose.
Thank you Jennifer! I appreciate the compliment, I end up in some kind of poetic trance when I write.
Unsettling but also so human, this made me feel claustrophobic but free at the same time if that makes sense
That makes perfect sense, this was more of the the horror chapter because she was dealing with big bad. I felt free when she finally got out of there tbh. I couldn't write it fast enough.
This piece brilliantly captures the visceral horror of dystopian control - the way you portray the body as a site of power struggle is chilling. The imagery of humanity being hunted and manipulated really drives home how dystopian systems strip away agency at the most fundamental level.
A lot of it is reflective with current systems of the world, some things have not been made. I'm glad you caught onto the metaphors. Thank you that's what I was hoping to go for, something a little unsettling to remind others why agency is indeed important.
Head string cheese. Oh god. Love the descriptions of the inhuman human bodies… very eerie indeed. And the way you write violence is 🤌🤌
I was eating also string cheese as I wrote it. ~ clones were weird rubber creatures in my head but like a step above silicone like if silicone was slippery skin. I didn't want to spend a chapter on skin, but almost did. Thank you! I have been working on action. I want it to be poetic even if it's grotesque. Now this is over time for some lesbian werewolves 💓
its getting worse every week.
It is unfortunately:(