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Laid Papinova's avatar

This piece captures modern alienation quite well. I'm quite impressed by it.

Edith Bow's avatar

Thank you. I was definitely going for isolationist here with certain redacted prompt themes. I wanted it to feel both jarring & relatable.

Laid Papinova's avatar

it succeeded on both!

Papi Pavarotti's avatar

beauty

Edith Bow's avatar

Thanks, glad it hit right. 🙌

Emil Ottoman's avatar

This one got me. The whole of it, but the ending shook me.

Edith Bow's avatar

I watched you shiver, I haven't done that in awhile. I feel proud.

MA Knight's avatar

This is poetry. I am always inspired by your work, always always.

Edith Bow's avatar

Me too (inspired by your work). & your work also makes me feel good. I don't know how else to put it. & Thank you I'm honored.

MA Knight's avatar

Ugh 🩷 that makes me so happy

Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Rad. Straight up.

Edith Bow's avatar

I worked SO hard on this piece. I'm very happy with it. Thank you ❣️

Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

It's evident. Really polished--without feeling like it!