Just sat for a while trying to think what you wrote tastes like in the brain. Hard to say - really liquid this one - I'm getting liquid. And I can almost hear you speaking it. I said more about my gut reaction when I restacked. - As ever, a joy....well when I say "joy"....
I would pay in poetry to see you do a backflip in real time. I feel like most writers feel that way. Don't they? Words fermenting over a fire when we sleep.
And at the end of reading this The Killing Moon started playing in my head.
Your nose a dragon’s nostril is so sexy a line! Loved it all
Just sat for a while trying to think what you wrote tastes like in the brain. Hard to say - really liquid this one - I'm getting liquid. And I can almost hear you speaking it. I said more about my gut reaction when I restacked. - As ever, a joy....well when I say "joy"....
haven't read it yet but YESSSSS...more has arrived!
Did a little backflip here
“You taste the burnt edges in your mouth when you sleep”
I would pay in poetry to see you do a backflip in real time. I feel like most writers feel that way. Don't they? Words fermenting over a fire when we sleep.