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Emil Ottoman's avatar

This one had some amazing lines, and you gotta pay attention to what’s actually underneath the words.

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Simpulacra's avatar

I was gonna say like reading Elvis Costello lyrics

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Edith Bow's avatar

Shiiiit. I will take it. I was definitely listening to experimental electronica stuff. Nice.

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Nick Winney's avatar

I don't know how you do it and i suspect you don't know either...it's just in you...it is you.

the words in isolation mean very little but these seemingly meaningless clips and bites all conjur up feelings and images ... like ingredients...like colours at the paint mix machine -on their own they are not right but when you mix them into your brain...the true colour comes out ...but its not meaning in the sense that typically structured sentences would create...its a synthesis of feelings and images which is why these always read like films in my mind swirling out of a mist from the first lines and coalescing

really extraordinary.

which is why they get better the more you read them...which is why its hard to remember the actual words; impossible to memorise a quote but the images stay.

always a delight 🫠

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Edith Bow's avatar

The synopsis has to do with fraud people/authenticity, and also the "sacrificial lamb" how people who speak the truth can be sacrificed to stay quiet. That's the metaphor, but yes everything is a layer within me, and sometimes a memory I've made fiction where I've been wronged as a scapegoat.

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